Never fun saying good bye

It's Never fun to say good bye

as the tears come out of my eyes
its never fun to say good bye
as i watch you leaving my side 
remembering all the memories
now that are the only things I can see
All the nice things from the 
I should of known it wouldnt last
all the laughs we once shared are now all shared with her
all the tears and pain that came 
are coming back to me again
all the secrets that we once shared 
are told to her in her ear
all the blood that was shed
are not with me waiting for death
its never fun to say good bye 
as i lay here and cry as I die

Reviews

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. Great emotion, rhythm, and rhyme help it flow very nicely. Great job! Keep it up!