Messed up World

you seem to see hatred
everywhere
example
someones gay, lesbian
what is so wrong with that?
they are being themselves
when all you can do
is be fake
love is always a touchy matter
and yet when it comes to them
they are always treated
like s**t
like when people with a cold heart see them
all they can do is look in disgust
because they arent what they chose to call "normal"
what the f**k is normal?!
it is nothing more than someones comfort zone
thats all
people now are nothing but fake
they feel the need to cling to their electronics
like it can save them
when it brings nothing but pain
which in turns means there is no originality
left it what we call our world
no
no there is none
everything seems to be a repeat
all people seem to be stuck
in this never ending cycle
of repeat
yet...
when it comes to hatred
people are finding new ways to make people
feel more and more worthless
suicides are more frequent
and its such a sad loss
no one thinks
why they did it
they only look at that fact they did it
and they call them wimps on life
when they dont understand
what that person was
thinking
feeling
experiencing
the human mind is...
well everyone has there hard times
but no one wants to see
whats happening between closed doors
no one wants to feel
what others have felt
no one wants anything but
a perfect life.

Author's Note

ranting

Reviews

[Steve Ryman]

Love this chapter. "People now are nothing but fake, they feel the need to cling to their elecronics" So true. where would these people be without their computers, mobile phones or games stations? Up the creak without a paddle... that's where!!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Good rant.
I dont believe everyone hates.
There must be a lot of people who
have a big heart.
But you have written it well.
-----Eagle Cruagh