My Pain

A tear falls down
my cheeks
as i think of the last time
we touched
and held our love close
yet it always seems to change
as though my heart
isn't anything
yet it is more fragile than glass
it breaks at any new touch
people think they can mend a broken heart
but they never can
it is always the same
since you left me
you were fun
funny
loving
caring
and the most amazing lover i've ever had
you touched my soul
it was like ice when you left
like the first sign of winter
it hit me hard like a snow ball to the face
i am left alone
broken and bruised
for what?
another girl
a video game?
why wont you utter a word to me why u left
this pain you caused i will keep i my heart forever
you were my pain.

Reviews

[Steve Ryman]

So sad and true to life. Have had this done to me. This is well written and heartbreaking to read. Excellent work.

[Strake]

Hm, I do like it for sure, but I also hope that this is not a feeling you've felt.