True Love

description of true love according to me..

 In this beautiful gift of life
 we make a numerous friends

 we earn a lot of wealth
 we laugh whenever we feel like
 we cry a several times

 we rise to the top a many time
 we fall down each time we rise up
 But, there's one thing which we get only once in a lifetime..
 and that is TRUE LOVE!!!!

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Reviews

[clau]

Your writing is very simple. Good. That is the way to write. Keep it simple. Simple writing is great writing. Use powerful verbs and few adjectives. Your poem is very good. But It would be a lot stronger, if you changed, " we fall down each time we rise up" to " we fall to the bottom a many time" Symmetry in writing is beautiful.
Your use of we is very good. Very strong and builds energy. Keep writing.