feelings

when dusk turns to dawn

you will still be the one

when hell freezes over

you'll keep my heart warm

when everything goes wrong

your thought will sing a song

a sweet melody in my thoughts

over you? i think not

move on the chiming words in my ears

i just can't let go for it is the worst of my fears

every moment every place is a ghost of us... of you

there is no moment of peace i don't know what to do

haunting spirits of our past coming up like bile

i remember you by everything your very unique style

it's taboo to talk feelings when i am around you

i am kept in the dark about everything you do

the first waking thought the last as i fall asleep

inside i am crying please stop haunting me 

i don't want to care anymore for you

i don't want to love for my heart is blue

big sister asks what is making me cry

and it hurts even more to tell her why

to admit to the world i let you go

that is now my everyday sorrow

my life is okay yet not complete

my poetry helps my heart not to bleed

my personal thoughts spread for everyone to see

i want you to know who i want to be

happy and carefree and loving the sun

not gloomy and sad knowing we are done

i let myself fall before i knew what love was

and wanted to know if you were the one

deep in my heart after it is too late

i know i love you that is no debate

when the day comes to end i will look for the start

i will look for the answer deep from within my heart

you tell me not cry that you haven't yet

but i can not build up what has me upset

i would love to keep in every single pain

yet i can not keep hidden my dirty shame

i will end this now while my thoughts carry on

this poem is really getting way too long

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

the poem was awesome!
and you ended it perfectly!