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When life took a turn 

for the worse 

you stood there by me 

to watch the herse

it took away not a body,

nor soul

but my life it carried,

every dream and goal

piece by piece 

i fixed the puzzle

that looked like life

that was buried by shovel

now here in my hands 

are pieces of my heart

looking down at fragments

where do i start

stick glue by side and

tape at hand

i piece back my

life right where i stand

little by little it comes together

the life i had should have

been forever

carried in a memory of 

a little home

filled with lies, but love was that shone

im not quite sure where 

i am today

my eyes filled with hurt,

my heart with dismay

but i carry on with 

a kindered soul

& work everyday towards

my hard earned goal...

Reviews

[cfix]

"it took away not a body,
nor soul
but my life it carried,
every dream and goal"

I loved these words alot, This is one amazing write.
Love the rhyme scheme and flow.

[Adam :P]

that was really good!