sorry

sorry

A Poem by loverly9316

Truth upon faults
it was really just talk
lies between words
i need to be forward

never have i loved
like i have with you
there is no excuse 
for what i do

i wish that you'd forgive me
and say that you still care
tears that i have shed 
the remains are still there

the actions i gave
upon one faulty gaze,
they were nothing to me
i just wish you could see

that paranoid or not
i love you alot



© 2010 loverly9316


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This is simply amazing! I enjoyed this write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, brilliant! Loving the ending. :) Keep it up!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked the poem.understanding is needed for a true love..nice:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love this! :) Keep writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Somebody has a glow on :)
I enjoyed this

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 22, 2010
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loverly9316
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morrow :P, GA



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☺/ /▌ / ok so im very random and cheery except when im mad then you should back away slowly . . very slowly . i am silly and i am very proud to say a SPAZ and i cover it up by callin.. more..

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