Super Hero

Super Hero

A Poem by loverly9316

You fly In to wipe away all my tears

you've held my hand throught these years

You always cheer me up again

and when i fall its your hand you lend

fighting away the darknes surrounding me

all the evils, my eyes refuse to see

you've always been my big red cape

the one i use to safely escape

you tell me to let my worries fly with the wind

and after all the words i know its love you send

you've been my comfort since the age of zero

mom, i hope you know your my

Super Hero

© 2010 loverly9316


Author's Note

loverly9316
comment for whatever you want this is for my moms birthday and i would love reviews

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I thought this was so sweet! Especially because in general there are the poems about a guy coming in a sweeping a girl off their feet "saving them" but I thought this was really cool that you didn't go with the cliche and instead made it your mom :)


Posted 14 Years Ago


A good poem, I like it. I was surprise and pleased to find who your Hero was, I expecting a man. Well done and thank you for sharing. God Bless

Posted 14 Years Ago


Glad it was 4 ur mum :)))) Nicely expressed n written I enjoyed it!!! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


a very sweet and touching poem, i liked it! great job i hope your mom likes it:)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 10, 2010
Last Updated on April 18, 2010

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loverly9316
loverly9316

morrow :P, GA



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☺/ /▌ / ok so im very random and cheery except when im mad then you should back away slowly . . very slowly . i am silly and i am very proud to say a SPAZ and i cover it up by callin.. more..

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