The walk

The walk

A Chapter by Bonnie Lou Duvall
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Kaitlyn decides to go for a walk with her best friend Tyler in the park.

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 Kaitlyn why did you just now decide that you want to go for a walk in the park? 
Because Tyler I love going for a walk after dark in the park and you know that.
Yea,yea I know that but I dont understand why you do though.
Because I like the feeling of not having a bunch of people walking with us and judgeing how I look.
Well Kaitlyn you do know that not everyone judges you don't you?
Yes I do but I still do not like being around a lot of people you know that.
Yea I do you have been that way every since that day that I first met you.
Yes I have been and I a;ways will be and you know that.
KAITLYN WATCH OUT!
Tyler whats going on what do you mean watch out?
Kaitlyn move!
The blaack gloved hand wrapped around Kaitlyn's waist and mouth and she was gone.
There was silence.
Kaitlyn was for sure gone.
I raced home to tell my parents what had happened when I tripped and fell.


© 2014 Bonnie Lou Duvall


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Thank you for your feed back on it !

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Well what would you like me to add to it?


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I like it so far. It could have been longer though.

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my name is Bonnie Lou DuVall.I'm 15 and I've been through things no one would understand. more..

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