Bacteria

A little on the emotional side.

You are like a deadly bacteria,

eating away at my heart and emotions.

I see and feel the pain,

and you are all I can think about.

I can't get you out of my head,

no matter how hard i try to think of other things, you are there,

you haunt my thoughts, and, yes, even my dreams.

I try to erase you out of my memory,

to ease the pain,

but i just can't seem to be able to do it.

I am weak, I , Am, Hurting.

You are my,

Bacteria.

Author's Note

I was hurting when i wrote this.

Reviews

[Amanda]

it seems that we all go through this same thing from time to time...but always remember that eventually the pain and the 'bacteria' goes away. life is too short to sweat things the small stuff, no matter how much it hurts.
i have learned the hard way about life and love and i have decided that no matter what i will continue to live, pick myself up, and get beyond the hurting...cause you will never know what you will find if you don't.

Amanda

[anthony lopez]

Wow I can't believe it's been 2 years since this happend.

[Anonymous]

OH my goodness! It's like you plucked those words straight out of my head! It's good :)

[Venompen]

Sounds like you went through a rough breakup.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Your pain oozed off the screen. This is like 3D poetry in the making. This new voice is awesome. I am sorry for your pain but you used it to inspire other while getting something out of your head and heart. Again thanks for the read requests. My brother you got skills.

[Tai-San]

this is good, but it made me cry.

[Catastrophe]

The emotions are just real and raw...I could definitely feel the pain through the words...
great write.
I love it.

[Witness 2 Humanities In..]

Love it! good job!

[Shugotenshi1692]

i can feel ur hurt. and i can definitely rel8 2 it. good piece. going in my favorites.