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A Poem by Backlight Burner

Sweet surrender 
I give my all to you
You are my heart
My home
My love
Without you
My life means nothing...

When things get hard
When we fight
When nothing seems right
Remember all you mean to me
You are my life
My light
And nothing will ever change that...

So stay with me
Till the end of days
As one embrace
Forever
Burning love.

© 2012 Backlight Burner


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Backlight Burner
I love you <3

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very deep............... good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


I find it incredibly insightful and sweet to the point of tears, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


aww this is so cute! great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice indeed:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sweet! Really nice piece of poetry! Thanks for sharing it
-Akanksha Suresh.


Posted 12 Years Ago


This is another deeply powerful piece! The best thing about fighting with a lover though, Is the making up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet, and I like how you kept it simple and to the point. Aww :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awww sweet
-Eleanor

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love it it sounds like a wedding vows

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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