Shaping my life

Look up in the sky,

               Sweet darlin’

             I’ll make your dreams come true

             Hold your head up high

              Sweet darlin’

             Don’t let ‘em see you break”

             Those are the words

            My grandpa said to me

             The night he died

             They shaped who I am today

              And so did his life.

             Cuz I breathe in

              I breathe out

              I look up and thank him now!

 

Reviews

[*~Kristy~*]

This was beautiful! It reminded me a lot of my grandfather, that I lost over the summer. He was such an honest and caring person. It really made me remember how amazing he was. I loved this, it was a very well written and beautiful poem, with perfect diction and syntax. Your emotions were conveyed very well. Great job!

[Susan14]

this was beautiful! it reminded me alot of my grandfather, that i lost a 10 years ago. He was an honest man and caring too. It really mande me remember how amazing he was. I loved this, it was a very well written and beautiful piece of poetry, with perfect diction and syntax. Your emotions were conveyed very well. Great job, keep it up!

[Diego]

This is a wonderful tribute to your grandfather and I must say I agree with his words!

[Brittney]

Really Nice Job! It made me feel thankful for everyone in my life, because they have all made an impact. Great Job!

[Annabel Lee]

This is really great! Not often is personal writing good, but you really make it work! Keep it up, hope to hear more!