Falling In Love (at the coffee shop)

Falling In Love (at the coffee shop)

A Poem by Sabrina Claridge

the loud chatter muses 
in a stream of mist 
as random indie music 
churns together the 
delicate experience 
of waiting in line
(at the coffee shop)
i never thought i 
would find love
(at the coffee shop)
but when the beautiful 
barista sighs into her 
work load i can only 
spill my medium drip 
and hope she 
notices 

© 2012 Sabrina Claridge


Author's Note

Sabrina Claridge
This actually happened. I saw this girl working at the coffee house I go to. I accidentally spilled my drink and she helped me clean it up. I never spoke to her again, sadly.

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Love is a strange, strange force in the human heart, isn't it?

Posted 12 Years Ago


It feels a bit unfinished. Other than that very good. It's kinda cute how that actually happened. You should really talk to her. Maybe a spark of fire will light up. You may never know until you try. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Made me smile, and smell the coffee. Good show

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 23, 2012
Last Updated on January 23, 2012
Tags: coffee, coffee shop, love

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Sabrina Claridge
Sabrina Claridge

Bel Air, MD



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