The Fall

Falling from the highest point that could ever be reached feels like a fall that could never be recovered from you know your falling but dont scream or cry your past that you embrace and accept that you are falling and one day you will hit the bottom but the hope of it is to find your strength to get back up and try again to forget how hard the fall damaged you and look at the scars letting the feelings felt by them urge you forward instead of traping you there pushing you backwards. Be strong and push it behind you look towards the horizon and embrace your mistakes that caused the fall and learn from them to continue forward

Reviews

[Katreya]

Seems like this would be very promising - it needs to be arranged in a slightly poetic fashion. For a reader, its a bit of a confusion to see words all pushed together without commas, full stops or, as you more commonly see in poems, line breaks. I would suggest fixing its layout as a main point, as for the rest, it's up to you! :)

[thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:]

Lot of emotion in this, but i may suggest that if you were going to keep this a poem then you need to put it in some kind of poem format, like have stanzas or something. but other than that i loved it there was emotion yet it was full of truth. good job on this.