Is life here?

keeping time and space in mind i search this hollow shell poking and proding around to find a pulse to feel a warmth that used to exsist...nothing quiet,cold and emtyness dwels here now. i move up to a higher place to observe a dark dimily lit place that used to be bright and full of energy now only tormenting memories of past happiness lingers in this lonely room the only sounds left in the shell is the sound of an old projector showing the madening moments over and over until this shell deteriorates and rotts away.(things may be mispelled sorry!)

Reviews

[Matt]

wow i like this. pretty good flow

[melissa]

good stuff :)

[LostinKristina]

arland i like this a lot.