We All Fall

Taunting eyes

Your despise

has carried me

to wind blown skies

to win the fight

to beat the night

would guide me

to morning light

a bloody war

i´ll fight no more

till the day comes

to open that door

to guide me

out to sea

and take me away

to the blessed tree

where i will lie

and think to i

that soon, my love

i will fly

up to my star

in the heavens afar

to hope to see you

my lovely jaguar  

Reviews

[Yui Tarsis]

Wow. I usually don't like poems, but this one was amazing! This is just a knitpick for me, but maybe change "despise" to "demise"? It would fit the mood of the poem a bit more, I would think. And the "my lovely jaguar" line at the end referencing your name was amazing X3

[Dreaded Reset]

thank you so much! i didnt mean to reference my name at the end, but im happy that you like it meow!

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This is have very nice magical end. And there is lot of beauty