Winter

Winter

A Poem by love, lorey
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unfinished.

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A lost feather
from an angels wing?
a glittery, sad, beautiful thing.

Cold, like memories
left to die.
an intricate wish and a lovers sigh.

Falling from heaven
and gracing the earth.
snowflakes all die, with childlike mirth.

winter has come
with violence and grace.
burning your skin and kissing your face.

© 2013 love, lorey


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The emotions feel real in this poem, and is very soft like a feather floating down. Awesome write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful rhyming and you capture the whole essence of winter with a great word selection. I like the image of a lost feather, not something I usually see in winter. Enjoyed reading this :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the imagery expressed in this. Every word so delicately fits into place like patches of fabric to create a beautiful quilt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


love, lorey

11 Years Ago

What a beautiful review, thank you!
Making sadness beautiful is beautiful. Beauty on.

Posted 11 Years Ago


love, lorey

11 Years Ago

Thank ya much darlin', appreciate it! :)

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love, lorey

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