she

she's here again to kill me

break my mind and thrill me

she's a danger to her lovers

beautiful death uncovered

break me, break me

take me

steal my soul and save me.

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

" steal my soul and save me." painfully brilliant

[love, lorey]

Thank you!

[Planet x]

More questions here for me after I finished reading
I wonder

[love, lorey]

Well, as Richard Feynman said, "I would rather have questions that can't be answered, than answers that can't be questioned."

[ron]

Loving this one on so many levels.

[love, lorey]

Thanks, Ron :)

[ron]

You are very welcome Lorey :)

[Glenn McCrary]

I love this poem a lot. It reminds me of a certain woman...

[love, lorey]

Lol buyer beware

[Christoph]

This reads like a challenge. A struggle, sure, but you've got the beast by the balls.

[love, lorey]

Which is def where you should have a beast by. If you were going to be grabbing at one that is. :)

[ayele marie dalmeida]

short yet powerful . very nice :)

[love, lorey]

Thank you! :)

[MsJewel]

The emotion in this poem is really quite powerful. I read it a few times and it seriously gave me chills. I love the ending...take me - steal my soul and save me. Brilliant writing. You really have an amazing talent.


:) Julie

[love, lorey]

Thank you so much! I truly appreciate it!!