my heart

my heart

A Poem by love, lorey
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Written with the deft help of my lovely 5- and 6-year-olds, on them and their sweet baby sister.

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She skips across the playground
fairy light in her hair
A smile and a simple song
rose bud lips, she offers a kiss.

my angel,
my love.

He's rough and tumble ready
all dirt and scrapes and grins
wearing a hero cape with his teddy bear
night-light powers, he has no fear.

my darling,
my love.

she's fragile and new
wrapped in pink and tulle and dreams
perfect little hands held out
eyes shine, the perfect pout.

my baby,
my love.

© 2013 love, lorey


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Awww! What a sweet, sweet picture! While the poem can't begin to compare to those three perfect beings, your words embody the love that every mother should have for her children. I really admire the freedom that children have within themselves: the freedom to be, to love, to laugh, to be all-trusting; and I wish that they could always be that way.

You have an angel, a darling, and a baby. They are your loves, and that makes you one of the richest women in the world.

I love this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I adore my little minions :)



Reviews

So sweet
I enjoyed your words
They should be older by now and can probably appreciate your tribute here


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love, lorey

4 Years Ago

True, they are! and I hope they will
An adorable ode to your children. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

:)
i love how this is from both perspective and how short and sweet this is. very talented :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much! Appreciate it!
ayele marie dalmeida

10 Years Ago

Anytime :)
This is so beautiful, it reminds me of my sister and her babies and makes me look forward to the good things if I get to be a mother someday.

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Being a mommy is tons of fun, and def worth anything :)
Oh I love this! What a beautiful poem for your children. This is one I'm sure they will cherish as they get older.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Aww thank you! :) I hope they will.
A nice poem with the wonderful feel.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you
:)
Awww! What a sweet, sweet picture! While the poem can't begin to compare to those three perfect beings, your words embody the love that every mother should have for her children. I really admire the freedom that children have within themselves: the freedom to be, to love, to laugh, to be all-trusting; and I wish that they could always be that way.

You have an angel, a darling, and a baby. They are your loves, and that makes you one of the richest women in the world.

I love this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

love, lorey

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I adore my little minions :)

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