window

window

A Poem by lola love

today i looked out the window,

what did i see?
a butterfly roaming free!
today i looked out the window,
what did i see?
a squril running up my tree!
today i looked out the window,
what did i see?
 sunshine shining down on me!
today i looked out my window,
and what did i see?
you standing there looking at me!

© 2009 lola love


Author's Note

lola love
thank you for reading. please comment on this writing if i spelled something wrong or if there is grammar.

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I love it!
Great job, it really cute!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very cute! Though there are a few punction and spelling mistakes:
"What did I see/" changed to "What did I see?
"window

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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lola love
lola love

Seattle, WA



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i am very atletic. i absolutly LOVE to write. i am 17. currently dating.. srry boys. i do have a few writings not on here yet and if i don't have a lot it is because i do gymnastics, soccer, and 2 mor.. more..

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