Bring me to life

Bring me to life

A Poem by loveless
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A poem about Resurrection

"
There was light
Darkness snatched me

I am in darkness
But what's this

I can't see
I can't feel
I can't breathe
This can't be real
My heart
It doesn't beat
I'm so cold
I'm losing my heat
I can't scream
I can't moan
I can't move
My body's turning into stone

I'm so numb
I'm dying

Wait
What's happening

I feel something
On my face
My face feels wet
I'm in someone's embrace
I can feel
Someone's there
That one's crying
I can hear
"You can't just leave me"
I hear her scream
"Come back to me
Wake up from this dream"
I can feel
She is in pain
Her tears are falling on me
Like they are some rain

She shriek aloud
My name

My soul
She have to reclaim

With her soft hands
She's crushing my chest
She doesn't stops
Neither takes any rest
She's breathing into me
A new life
I can feel now
She is making me alive
She's holding my hands
And they feel warm
My body's warming up
Breaking life's every norm

My heart
I feel it beat

I slowly open
My eyes

I see a new light
Of a new dawn
The death had lost
His pride and glory are gone
My body and my heart
I feel them burn auburn
In the flame, whose shine
Is like a million suns

In the fire of life
I burn

© 2016 loveless


Author's Note

loveless
Just a poem.

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How beautiful to write of someone who can bring you back to life with as simple a gesture as holding a hand. I really like this poem, and the point of view of the guy. How he realizes he is in an embrace and someone is crying on his shoulder. The last few stanzas are perfectly written, and very different from the rest of the poem, that what I love about them. After his eyes are open its a whole new world, a whole new life.

Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 10, 2016
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Tags: Life, love, light, angel, dark, heart, shriek, scream, name, soul, resurrection, death, darkness

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