For You

To me there is nothing wrong with your imperfections

The flaws in your eyes give me unbelievable sensations

 

To me there is nothing wrong with the words that you speak

They push me harder to find for you what you seek

 

To me there is nothing wrong with your love

I find it quite disheartening that you would place yourself above

 

To me there is nothing wrong with who you are

You’re exactly why my love has traveled so far

Reviews

[paparapapa]

Aaaw. This is really sweet. Loving a person unconditionally is one of the nicest things you can do for a person. I love how this poem flowed. Oh, and I also liked the rhyme scheme. Great write. :)

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, love this stanza! Your rhyme scheme is perfection...

Love the ending line...To me there is nothing wrong with who you are/
You’re exactly why my love has traveled so far.

Now, that's LOVE, you're putting it down and putting it on Blast. :)