Between Us

If I had to guess...
I'd say you're pretty much perfect.

If I had my way..

This thing with you would be nothing but amazing.

If I had to say it...

I'd tell you you're all the wonderful I ever wanted.

And if I had to wish...

I'd wish you were close enough for me to touch.

Because you...

You see me;

The deepest parts of the darkest places.

And you...

You show me...

The sweetest things in the most explicit ways.

If I had to break it down...

I cherish everything about you.

If I had to say one word...

I'd have to say it would be 'absolutely undeniable'

If I had to choose...

I'd choose us each in every possible way.

And while I'm dreaming...

Hold my mind to keep it from falling away from you

Because you...

You see me;

The deepest parts of the darkest places.

And you...

You show me...

The sweetest things in the most explicit ways.

...And if you were close enough to hold me

And I was close enough to touch you

I would think that it would be nothing but amazing

And we would be 'absolutely undeniable'

Author's Note

Short write , at work. Needs to be edited at a later time when I can really focus. It made sense in my head though :) any constructive criticism is always wanted and welcome

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

Congratulation on your wedding!
This is a beautifully written poem celebrating love with the one you share your intimate time and space with.

WELL DONE

[conversations with her ..]

THIS.

beautifully written.. this piece inspired me to write again. I'm new on here, so id love it if you were to review one of my poems!

[Valeria P.]

Beautifully written....I love when there is writing that I can understand and relate too in every way....Keep it up!!1

[lovejulez03]

Thank you for taking the time to read it, I appreciate it and glad you could relate :)

[kyam]

STOP!! Critizing yourself, these are pure beautiful feelings we have here, I love them and the purity and rawness of them. Don't apologise for your feelings, my dear. This evidently came from deep inside a place in your soul and heart! Thank you for sharing your feelings with me, I appreciate that so much...Kyam100

[Blank_fortunes]

I wish I knew the proper way to describe what you did here but I don't. I will say that prior to the last stanza I was blown away with where this poem took me. You have a way of creating desire within your audience with just your words. But that last stanza did something special though it brought a new Idea to me as a reader that sounded as if I had heard it somewhere before. so much so that I had to go back and find the lines in the poem. Thank you for this one.

[lovejulez03]

Thank you for your kind words - I'm always delighted when you stop by and take time to read. :)