Insecurities Dreaming

Wanting control is never a simple thing

For once let me be the only one you pine for

For once let me be the mysterious siren

 

For once let me control you, in infinite ways

For always let me have you within my reach

 

For once let me be the perfect creature

For once let me feel what it’s like to be beautiful

 

For once let me be more than just a pretty smile

For always let me be the one who got away

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Or just let things happen...I learned long ago...don't make things complicated and you'll most likely see the results you want...do your thing...go watch a movie by yourself...get your nails done...love yourself...and someone will notice that. Just a food for thought. Nevertheless, a deep emotive write expressed on his you currently feel. And very well expressed indeed.

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

for once let me be the perfect picture. we all want to feel special sometimes even if its for a brief moment .

good work

[lovejulez03]

Thanks for reading, its appreciated

[Deuces]

Beautiful poem. You poured your heart out in this one. We all strive to be that one that compares to no other... for the one we truly want and love. Awesome last line as well. Very nice, my friend.

[lovejulez03]

Thank you for reading ,I appreciate it

[Sami Khalil]

Wanting control is not a good thing but earning respect is better I guess. I could be wrong...A wonderful write...:)............

[lovejulez03]

You're right Sami.. human nature is so complex and so simple at the same time. Our need to control comes in all shapes and sizes..but when it comes to controlling our primal instincts with other people, it can drive us crazy . Thanks for reading :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true. Thank you for the validation. Take care...:)......................

[wordman]

and when you get away we have to dream about you

[lovejulez03]

Thank you for stopping by and reading, I appreciate it :)

[wordman]

you are welcome