Follow Me

Follow me into unknown places

Where unicorns have wings

And spirits have faces

 

Follow me through a time less traveled

Where angels don’t sing

And spirituality is unraveled

 

Follow me into a timeless abyss

Where everything is possible

And nothing is missed

 

Follow me along chords of forever

Where melodies go unheard

Obscured by lyrical endeavor

 

Follow me now,

And I shall take you there

To a place unknown

Where we are free to care

 

Follow me now,

And I shall show you light

In a place of adoration

Where dreams take flight

Author's Note

This just came out.. short and simple, I believe. Not sure what sparked it except that I hope to feel this longing again someday.

Reviews

[Eve]

This piece is so well balanced with its incredible imagery and its natural emotional pull. This poem deserves to be published. It is only a shame that so many people will be unable to read it.

[lovejulez03]

Thank you so much for stopping by to read it. Your words are so kind and I appreciate them! :)

[Eve]

It is a pleasure to read words as well phrased as these. No thanks needed.

[SteveB]

Lovely. Vivid images and and a lovely romantic mood set. I like the fact that you did not go for the obvious rhyme [forever/endeavor]. The shift from 3 line to 4 line with the repetition of the imperative first line - a deft touch.
I am so glad I read this piece. Thank you for sharing it.

[lovejulez03]

Thank you so much for your kind words, I really appreciate you taking time to read this. :) As I get older I try to pay more attention to the way I write... things can only get better with time. Nice to get feedback from someone who writes so well!

[SteveB]

It was my pleasure. And you are far too kind in your opinion of my writing. But they do say mid-westerners are born kind.