Love's Imperfection

a short peom about love

The optimistic hope,
Is a glorious imperfection,
The idea that true love really exists.
Is what we always ponder,
After a sudden heart break.

Yet so tragic we remain,
Our hearts shattered,
Our existance flawed,
But yet somehow...
Still capable of love.

Reviews

[forsaken_beauty]

Thanks! :)

[nora]

oh my god, this is awesomee! the whole idea behind it is amazing. the flow is really, like, smooth, and your simple word choice works really well for it.

"The optimistic hope,
Is a glorious imperfection"

those lines are definetly my favorite. the whole idea that being optimistic can be a flaw is amazing and super creative :) great write, forsaken :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The heart is a great healer... in fact can be stronger after a heartbreak... I do love the positive message of this piece.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh wow.. such truth and hope flowing from what could be a broken heart!!! I admire this and feel the same.. I would never lose hope of finding love.. I believe in lifting others up and being optimistic.. however some people just can't be lifted I have found.. it is then you have to decide if you want to be bound to depression or soar with another more optimistic!!! I am more optimistic than most.. and love this writing in it's simplicity!!! =)