"Untitled"

Love peom

I love the way i felt
you made my heart melt
i couldnt belive it was real
the sensation you made me feel
In my heart there was no pain
in my stomach all the joy contain
I smile at whatever you say
no ones ever made me feel this way
There is nothing i can do
but forever and always love you.

 

Author's Note

i could use some ideas for a good title....the format of this one sucks... i know lol

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow...I really liked it.. I am not really a format buff.. love the emotions that you clearly display through your writing ... keep working at it can't go wrong when it comes from the heart! Thank you for sharing! =)