I'm Here For You

I'm Here For You

A Poem by forsaken_beauty

I understand how hard this must be
but you should know I'm here for you,
I understand the sadness and tears
but you should know I'm here for you,


I feel your pain as if it were my own
If ever possible I would take it from you
I care for you more than I have ever shown
I just want you to know that I love you


You are not alone during these dark times
I send you this poem,riddled with rhymes
There comes a time when we all must part,
leaving you with such brutal pain in the heart


I just want you to know,that everything is ok
and that I'm here for you,
I shall sit and talk with you from night until day,
just so you know I'm here for you,
even though I am miles away,just know I share your grief
I only wish the best for you and blessings of relief


I shall always be your shoulder to cry on,even though I'm not around
but remember there is one certain place where you know I can be found
and there I shall sit and wait until I am satisfied,
just so you know I did my best,I gave my all I tried


to comfort you the best I can and shower you with love,
as of this moment nothing else exist cause its you I'm thinking of
just know I'm here for you love,and I will never leave
just think of me as the tightest hug,almost too tight to breathe

© 2008 forsaken_beauty


Author's Note

forsaken_beauty
The format isn't really too great, but i dont care honestly,lol. I hope you like it.

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You're right the format isn't wonderful but the content is... this is such fantastic feeling that the reader just flows right along through the rhyme changes and stanza length changes you don't even notice that some lines are longer with more syllables on the first read through becuase you are so caught up in the emotion of the poem that you can't notice or feel anything but that! this on one amazing example of how good content can outweigh the bad structure.... NICELY DONE!!!!!!!

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You're right the format isn't wonderful but the content is... this is such fantastic feeling that the reader just flows right along through the rhyme changes and stanza length changes you don't even notice that some lines are longer with more syllables on the first read through becuase you are so caught up in the emotion of the poem that you can't notice or feel anything but that! this on one amazing example of how good content can outweigh the bad structure.... NICELY DONE!!!!!!!

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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forsaken_beauty
forsaken_beauty

Joliet, IL



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Hi. :) My name�s Debra and I currently live in the Chicago area. I was born and raised a Chicago girl, with a short living stay in Las Vegas and Nebraska. Writing has always been the main .. more..

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