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A Poem by forsaken_beauty
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This is about not knowing if you should stay in a bad relationship when you're in love, or just let him go.

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For a while, we got lost, I don't know how I don't know why?
I didn't want to let him in, I didn't want him to see me cry

 

 

And everytime I saw him there, I pushed the love deep down below
But when he came to leave, I didn't want him to go

 

 

I wanted him to shout out for me, outside in the pouring rain
Pledging his undying love, wanting us to begin again

 

 

I look out of my window, he is not there to see
Is it because in hearts of hearts, he don't feel the same for me?

 

 

I wish I could see into his soul, to seek out what I need to know
Is it best to cover up, close my eyes and let him go?

© 2008 forsaken_beauty


Author's Note

forsaken_beauty
I haven't thought of a good title yet, so if anyone has any suggestions for one, feel free to share them with me. Thanks.

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The right cice would be to let him go if it was abad relationsip but that never seems to happen. We are creatures of habit. I can tell u to let him go but i know if it wasme in your stead i would want him to stay. When itcomes wn to i thats almost always the case...even though the one you "love" treas you like crap you want them still.

as for he title i don't write poems lol so i apologize fo not giving ne good suggestions but ne did pop into my mind," So Lost In Love..." but don't take me serious on hat i am not poet.

great wor here though as it reminds me of so many brken hearts ad bad relationships...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Loss of Nothing would be something I would throw as the title, but that is up to you. ;o)

Posted 17 Years Ago


The right cice would be to let him go if it was abad relationsip but that never seems to happen. We are creatures of habit. I can tell u to let him go but i know if it wasme in your stead i would want him to stay. When itcomes wn to i thats almost always the case...even though the one you "love" treas you like crap you want them still.

as for he title i don't write poems lol so i apologize fo not giving ne good suggestions but ne did pop into my mind," So Lost In Love..." but don't take me serious on hat i am not poet.

great wor here though as it reminds me of so many brken hearts ad bad relationships...

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hi. :) My name�s Debra and I currently live in the Chicago area. I was born and raised a Chicago girl, with a short living stay in Las Vegas and Nebraska. Writing has always been the main .. more..

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