Floating

Trying to tear me down

I bleed throw my eyes

and try to scream but nothing

comes out

Like u have stabbed me through

heart with word and actions

running away while i watch you

and stay right here

singing in my head with all my voice

 stuck in a whole everything spinning 

walking through a path that never ends

and tear drops fall of my chin

made very fragile 

careful touch and sensitive feelings

closer and closer almost there

and finally flying in the clouds

cant catch me now all the way 

up here

here comes the sun in my eyes

beautiful is what you see

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Started with confusion and ended with some kind of peace. Sometime we need to escape and see the sun and allow our eyes to see the beauty of a new day. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the use of words and how they create a devine scenery. Great write :)