The Open Door

There you are

scared to moved

but want to see whats 

out there in the world

There is an open door 

right in front of you

you want to step out

but you can't move because

someone has held you back

and has trapped you in 

his own prison

Where should you go?

nobody knows

your going crazy and you

hear thundering and horrifying 

music in your head

You have no idea whats going

on with yourself 

but you need to take a step 

out of the open door

"Come on! Come on!" 

you hear voices in your head

finally you take that step of relief 

out the door

Your Free!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Some doors are hard to get to. Can be fear or lack of desire to escape. Easy to swim in sadness and misery. Hard to run for a open door and know real freedom. I like the complete poem. A very strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote