Don't Give Up

There is always going to be

something in the way

but it doesn't matter

 

Whatever is in the way

just push it to the side and

don't give up

 

There might be voices in your

head

One might say to keep going

and don't stop

The other might say to

stop and just give up telling you

your wourthless

 

Something might knock you down

but that doesn't mean to stop

just get up on your feet

and keep going

 

Even when you think your going

to die and your a failure

keep going and stop knocking

yourself down or else you are  a

failure

 

Just listen to the right voice

in your head and just believe

you can do it

 

Please don't give up

Author's Note

this is my song that goes with this poem

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jpTYG_Sqqdg&feature=related

Reviews

[MikeyV]

I get you on this whole which voice should you listen to in your head thing. The creative geniuses out there struggle with this everyday. The critic in our head tries to keep us from expression and other parts try to tell us to conform, to give up, etc...can't do neither, I stick to the voice in my head that says "f**k it all, this is my life"

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the song. The words are strong and positive. You are correct in this poem. Can't give up. Need to stay positive and keep going forward. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[sarah]

this a really great write! I really loved it

[HopelesslyDevoted]

yeah this is an everyday battle for me... nice write!