the best summer

I swam in the most wonderful lake,

feeling the water rushing over my body,

the sunlight hitting on my face,

the sounds of the splashes and joy from the children

it was like a dream come true,

like the best summer ever.

I looked over the city that was below,

looking at that beauty made my eyes dazzled,

the sunshine made the city more enjoyable to look,

I promised myself I ouldn't foget this amazing day,

the best summer will always be in my memory.

Author's Note

Please ignore the word that's missing a "w".
Please tell me what you think ^_^

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I ignored it, Misss....
This is a good poem, am glad that you always admire what you see (:

[Love Demon]

Thank you :*

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Whoa, this poem is so beautiful and amazing! :D
The picture is so awesome too :D
I love it!
100/100

[Love Demon]

Thanks :*

[_]

Sounds magical. My summer sucked besides being on WC that cheered me up but sounds peaceful and serene :)

[Love Demon]

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