dazzled night

I walked all alone, under all the bright stars

I looked up in the sky, my eyes were hipnotize

from all the beauty the sky showed me

my heart skipped a beat, my mind was blank

I dropped my bag, I didn't pick it up

My eyes couldn't lookanywhere else

I laid down on the street,

not caring about the cars or trucks

I wanted to be in the sky,

glowing with the amazing stars,

sitting down on the moon,

seeing the planes flying by,

oh what a wish that would be,

not alone, but with the love of my life.

Author's Note

That's what I called "first magic" ^_^
Thank you roxast for helping me on this wonderful poem :D
Reviews?

Reviews

[Bluefire]

Very beautiful, I love the picture and the story the poem conveys. Well done ^^

[Castonovia]

Always wanted to do that with not a care in the world just free... staring at the hope-clad stars wishing I could be anywhere, but here even up there with them. Such a lovely piece, especially when you can share it with someone, well penned indeed :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe, this was a sweet right. I love looking at the sky. It is so pretty especially when you are able to see the stars, but I also like looking at the moon. I loved the photo too. Thanks for sharing.

[Love Demon]

Thank you Angie!!! ^_^

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You're welcome :3

[Draven]

I myself have had moments like this. The sky is a beautiful wonder indeed. This poem reminds me of myself when I began my work as a writer and I like that. Well done.

[Love Demon]

Thank you :)

[FrancescaX]

hypnotize..;D
magical night it is.
lovely

[Love Demon]

Thank you :3

[Rhianne Ney]

100/100

[Love Demon]

^_^

[Rhianne Ney]

hipnotize-hypnotize
This is a good poem... Very imaginative
*stop and stares*...

[Love Demon]

Thank you :D

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

So beautiful and amazing, I agree with you, this is "first magic" :D
Btw, your welcome ^_^
100/100

[Love Demon]

Thank you ^.^

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome. Nice piece. I really liked the end. Makes you feel like he/she's not just admiring stars but thinking of a lost loved one. Great job

[Love Demon]

Thank you ^.^

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I always wanted to do that!!!!...I'll do it with you if you do it with me....that sounded wrong lol but oh well! I LOVE YOUR POEM! :D

[Love Demon]

Thank you ^.^

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*hugs* WELCOME!

[Love Demon]

^_^