I have a song

death

I  have a song that i would love you to sing with me
but if i sing it you don't sing with me
i have a song i would love for you to hear

to bad you can't hear me sing it to you
i have a song id love to dance with you
to bad you can't even breath
i  wish i could dance to the song with you
i wish i could sing the song to you
i wish i could let you hear my song
i wish you could sing the song with me
the song is really beautiful 
it makes me think of the casket we put you in
it makes me think of how deep the hole was we put the casket in

it makes me think of the little black dress i wore
it makes me think of the tears i sheded for three weeks stright
it makes me think of how much i love and miss you
    Yes i have i beautiful song i wish you could heare
but you can't you are gone

Author's Note

In loving memory of my paw paw Roger who left me to go be with god in 2008 for this poem is deticated to him

Reviews

[Shadows Ember]

this is a very lovely piece.

[Brittany]

i did it really good i miss my dear paw paw

[Shadows Ember]

mine passed away this past december so i know your troubles

[Brittany]

he was the only one who cheered me up i know i was only 10 when he passed and my teacher called me cry baby everytime i cried about him but i remember everything about him