you left me there to die

I loved you

You lied to me in return
i needed you 
you left me in return
i lied there bleeding
you laughed
i gave you my hart
you broke it in return

i gave you my hand 
you held another in return
i stuck by you no matter what
you diddn't care in return 
you lied, cheated, stole, hurt 
but.......

i still love you for who you are

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I would drop that person like a hot skillet. But I wouldn't drop this poem,. Good write. thought here are a couple of small typos. No biggie didn't one d, and the "in return" is a bit repetitive, though I am a fan of repetitiveness, it kind of hampers the flow here. But these are just suggestions. Don't be saddened.

[Brittany]

thanks sweetie

[realmwriter]

Hope I wasn't out of line, because I really do like this piece. you write well and I hope to see new works from you.

[Brittany]

i have new stuff just go to my writing lol

[Brittany]

no sweetie you were not out of line

[realmwriter]

I will do that

[Brittany]

goos sweetie