Breath

Breath

A Poem by Lola

 

I need to breath....

breath to get out

of here.

 

So i can be with

you forever in

my dreams.

 

I need to breath.....

So i can see you

to be with you hopefuly

not just in my dreams.

© 2009 Lola


Author's Note

Lola
sorry for grammer and spelling

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Yes, the only grammar problem besides capitalization was "I need to breath" should be "I need to breathE".
That was really pretty!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Lola
Lola

LA, CA



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Make your own Glitter Graphics hey, i am Arabella....Lola is my pen name. I love to stay out late.You will still see me in the day light but not alot. I really enjoy being with m.. more..

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