OK

a girl finding a good side of a bully

oh ooh oh yeah! i never

felt this way about you

befor. its just too much

... just too much. oh yeah. i

always blocked ot out like

you would lock the door. oh ooh yeah.

 

But, know ... you have finally noticed me.

and i have noticed you in a whole new way

if you would ask me out

i would say ok..... yeah yeah oh yeah

 

All of my friends only know

the outside of you. they

don't know the real

yoooou.

 

But, know..... you have finally

noticed me. and i have

noticed you in a whole 

new way. if you would ask 

me out i would say OK...

yeah yeah oh yeah

 

Everyone knows you as this

whole different guy. But,.......

i know the real you........ oooh

 

But, know....... you have finally noticed

me. and i have noticed you 

in a whole new way. if you

would ask me out i would

say ok.....yeah yeah oh yeah 

(last yeah, fade out)

Author's Note

sorry for grammar and spelling

Reviews

[Faith]

hmm. well it wasn't all that bad, i just get the impression that it's, song lyrics?
so you should put 'music' as your genre, to prepare whom ever is about to read it.
grammer also needs some work, and i know that seems to be your weakest point but that can easily be defeated.
otherwise, and an okay job : )

-Faith♥

[Ben]

Well, this seems a little little kiddish, if you know what I mean. sorry, but it kind of does. It's needs major capitalization changes. I thought it was a little strange. Sorry. you should probably work on it.