dying in the arms of ;

dying in the arms of ;

A Poem by Suffer In Silence
"

making this up as i go along .

"

I'm wrapped around that little finger ,

holding on tight ;

can't have you leaving me tonight .

 

You're the only thing holding me down on this earth ;

if I dare to let go ,

 

I will never be around .

I'll be watching you from above .

So ;

Do it Do it or Die .

 

So don't let me get those crazy idea's again ;

because I may actually do it this time babe ,

and then who will be there for you when your craving ?

 

© 2008 Suffer In Silence


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Suffer In Silence
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- i need something to do with my time around here .

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thank you very much, both of you .

Posted 15 Years Ago


hmmmm.
Well he better stay with you or die.
I could make a song up like that and sing it.
You know your little s**t head is in this room as I'm typing this.
Tres interessant. ----> f**k i suck at french.
Oki doki well don't have babies or get aids

Lots of love
-Elissa

Posted 16 Years Ago


i loved this poem. "You're the only thing holding me down on this earth" this is a beautiful line, something i relate to. that's a lot of control to give to one person. i like the imagery here. very beautiful poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Suffer In Silence
Suffer In Silence

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