Naked Mattress .

i was actually falling alseep on a naked mattress : P that's the only true part in this poem ... the rest is just thought up . but yet , not a lie either .

I'm falling asleep on this naked mattress.

I can here the music playing from my i - pod .
I can't stand the noise.

I've been up late talking to you over the computer , babe .

I sit on my wooden chair , waiting for your reply.

It comes .

I say I'm going to bed .

So as I said ,

I'm falling asleep on this naked mattress.

I can hear the music coming from my i - pod.

But I am to lazy to get up and turn it off.

 

Author's Note

this poem makes no sense in my mind , so if you think it makes sense .. please tell me : P

Reviews

[peace SiGN./index DOWN.]

i like it.
how like ure falling asleep .
and the laziness comes.
but you express emotion also.

[☮]

Makes sense to me. You are falling asleep, as I have many times, on an unmade bed. One with sheets barely on it anymore, perhaps on the floor.

I enjoyed it.