Mistakes Happen.

Mistakes Happen.

A Poem by Suffer In Silence
"

i guess you have to read it to find out.

"

I ment to shoot you.

But i shot someone else instead.

It wasn't anyone you would love or care about.

Or even miss for that matter.

So don't worry about it.

It was just me.

 

© 2008 Suffer In Silence


Author's Note

Suffer In Silence
ignore any mistakes.
and sorry for making it short.

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It might be short, but it hits the right nerves that make the reader cringe at the end. Good job on it. The briefness kind of makes it as quick as the means of death. If it had been long, it would have been uncharacteristic for the theme.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I think it's good that it's brief. It's very concise and gets the message across bluntly, and the voice of the character seems to be rather blunt, so it ties itself together very nicely in that manner.

Posted 16 Years Ago


ooooooo. very sharp. I WITNESSED YOU WRITE THIS! good job bud. :D
nice pic too.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Suffer In Silence
Suffer In Silence

Canada, Canada



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My name is Aliya and I'm currently 16 years of age. My writing is pretty mutual, nothing extradionary or breath taking... not yet at least. If you have any comments on any of my poems, PLEASE commen.. more..

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