Locked Up.

Locked Up.

A Poem by Suffer In Silence
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I feel like an animal at the zoo.

I'm not in a real cage.

It just feels like it is.

 

Your the zoo keeper who laughs at me.

Who dosen't feed me.

Who dosen't love me.

 

I wonder I'm still sitting here.

Taking it all in.

 

Why can't I just break free from this cage ?

 

You walk past and laugh at me.

What makes you laigh at me ?

 

I get frusterated and get all my anger into one little ball.

 

I break free of your cage.

 

I throw you in there and laugh.

Isn't so nice is it ?

 

 

© 2008 Suffer In Silence


Author's Note

Suffer In Silence
i just kinda go carried away .

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I like it!!! Lovely. It's good. But I noticed one major spelling error. 5th last line.
By laigh I think you meant laugh.
But i love the poem!!! Good Job mum!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Suffer In Silence
Suffer In Silence

Canada, Canada



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My name is Aliya and I'm currently 16 years of age. My writing is pretty mutual, nothing extradionary or breath taking... not yet at least. If you have any comments on any of my poems, PLEASE commen.. more..

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