Lost with a Package

i seriously hope everyone likes it . this just came of the top if my head.

I walk along this beach asking myself,

Would it be different if I hadn't of met you ?

I think so.

I place my hands on my stomach and ask myself,

Does the baby look like you ?
Does it have your eyes ?

I look down and ask my stomach ,

If you look like him,

will the thought of him just being in you,

haunt me for the rest of my life ?

I think so.

I'm Lost with a Package.

Author's Note

this was off the top of my head , if you don't like it ... there WILL be more better ones to come.

Reviews

[Legion]

If this was off the top of your head, I can not wait for what lurks in the depths of said head. This is a very deep and thought provoking piece for a fifteen year old (for anyone for that matter). Wish I was writing like that at your age. Brilliant concept. Well done.

[Last Lying Look]

I love it! It's so sweet... lost with a package....

I'm hoping your not lost with that kind of package Aliya!