how i lost love...

why my writing name is loveLOST.........

-loveLOST...

--love to me is more thn jst a word

--love to me flys higher thn a birD

--love is somethinq more than just passion

--love is more than an attraction

--you said  ii love you

--ii said ii cared

--our relationship progressed into love

--oh.so it appreared

--you was beinq decievinq

--while ii was pleasinq.

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--yhu qave my heart ..a run for its money

--oh yes.indeed it sure did COST

--bt ii thank yhu .NOt. for tha love that was LOST[.]

 

-- ii hve loved.and ii am not afraid to LOVe.it feels qud to be in love.knowinq that another person cant qet you out of their mind..oHH it feels so qud..bt tha moRE ii think ii have found lOVE. tha more tears.the more betrayl.tha more heart ACHe ii cause myself. so when ii say i am love lost. I mean it. i have loved.i have BEEN IN love. but have ii found true love.....[not yet]// do ii think ii will..?? my answer to you is LOVElost.

Reviews

[Romi]

Hey lovelost I loved this sounded really good i can tell you wrote it from the heart and every bit of it was deep to you i really liked the ending its beautiful. and i felt your pain girl. "love is somethinq more than just passion love is more than an attraction"

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job

[loveLOST]

Thank yu boo!! More to come ! Bt thnx for dha inspiration to write again becz it helps so muchhhhh ..and it makes life a lil easier :)

[EboneeAlexis]

wow Joanne that was GREAT..i love the last paragraph, its deep. you sound like your up on stage at poetry night or something, very good. and my favorite part is when you said "you gave my heart a run for its money oh yes indeed it sure did cost. but i thank you NOT for the love that was lost". amazing boo