Love(;

Love(:

Love can be true, but not always

Love is not always the right thing in life

Love is like a love song baby(:

Author's Note

Please review and tell me what you think!
Thanks!

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Well, I'm all for minimalism, but I think this is pretty crap. You pretty much strung a few platitudes together and called it a poem. Some call that writing, but I personally think of it as laziness. Anyone can pull platitudes from their a*s. There's no meter to this, and really no originality. Try again kid, write something a bit more original.

[Barnie14]

Yep(:

[Jordan's Back]

Your Poem is a Good Start, and its got a lovely message :)

[Barnie14]

Thanks Chris(:

[Barnie14]

Thanks Chris(:

[Chris]

Good morning. Well, it's a beginning. Welcome to WC.

[Barnie14]

Thanks!

[soliloquy]

This is sweet. Well done. :0)