So Easy to Slip

It seems like it would be so easy to slip.
Stop the pseudo-bravery,
No more false courage.
Has this attempt at strength been for me or others...I wonder.

It seems like it would be so easy to slip.
I'm tired of the constant effort.
The future is inevitable, predetermined,
so why try so hard.

These are the thoughts of a dark time.
It seems like it would be so easy to slip.
What then?

Reviews

[Claude]

Thank you for the kindness and time.

[Laha]

i love your honesty in the poem.
Being able to write about it, and then share it...i'd say bravery is a good word.
All the best :)
L

[Samuel Dickens]

In light of your situation, I can see where the "slip" would seem appealing to you---at times, at least. I'll venture to say that your loved ones would not feel the same way, however. Hopefully, I have interpreted your meaning correctly.

[KAREN]

I ask myself this, but it seems theres nothing else to do but keep trying!! This poem relates to alot of people!