Summer

This is my first post. It started off as practise for my English GCSE but i thought it turned out okay, so I might as well post it on here. I'm not really sure if it would count as poetry but yeah

Summer.

The best time of the year. 

What's not to love? 

Sunny days, warm nights, beautiful sunsets and happy people,

The world comes alive in summer.

The birds sing, the grass grows, the flowers bloom,

Bare trees explode into colour.

Family trips to the beach; when sand sticks to your back and cold ice cream drips onto your toes.

Feeling the sun's rays warm the back of your neck.

Holidays abroad. Barbecues in the back garden. Relaxing with your friends.

Watching the sun drift lazily across the sky as the long summer days ware on.

lazy days.

Sitting by the pool and getting lost in the magic of a book.

Summer is when everyone truly enjoys themselves.

Summer is a time to look back on, when you're deep into the cold, consuming winter.

Summer is a time of colour, warmth and light.

Summer is happiness. 

Author's Note

Sorry, I know it's not very good but I just wanted to get something out there. Any opinions would be welcome to help me improve. Thank you for reading!

Reviews

[emma]

Dont ever doubt yourself this is good, sometimes what you think its most simplest and objective piece of work can be the best! It allows an escape to somwhere better, which isEXACTLY what it done for me. Keep writing.

[louisa]

thank you!! :)

[Patricia]

All poetry has value and all poetry is respected and sometimes the simplest poems brings warmth and smiles as does this one. It takes you away from your busy head to sun and fun, how can that be "not very good"? :)))
Keep writing!

[louisa]

aw thank you so much!!