Tiny Dancers

The flowers in the breeze are like dancers I think.

They swing and they sway like skaters in the rink.

The twist and they turn in the very stronjg breeze.

They look like tiny dancers as I watch from my knees

 

The shells on the beach are like dancers it seems.

In the waves they roll back and forth, by all means.

and when they're done dancing, and they sit in the sand,

I'll pick them up, those tired tiny dancers, 

and take them away, sleeping dancers in my hand. 

Author's Note

this is written in the piont of veiw of a little kid

Reviews

[Emmy]

Amazing Megan, truely amazing. x]

[Don Coorough]

I like your idea that everything in life is a dancer. Now, if only people could all learn the steps and dance in time with each other!

[Spoken]

I love the way you've described the shells as tiny little dancers. I'd imagine this is how a child would see it, that means you've done an excellent job getting into a childs mind. Well done!

[Mintwhiskers]

i read this already and i love such a original idea riting form a little kids point of view