the Secrets of the World

the Secrets of the World

A Poem by lots fo love ♥

Wind.

Streams.

Stars.

Why do these things not mean so much to us?

Open your eyes.

Take a look around.

Listen with your heart.

The wind whispers.

The steams babble.

The stars shimmer and light up the darkest of nights.

If you look closer you will see the secrets of the world.

 

© 2008 lots fo love ♥


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Niiiceeee.

Posted 16 Years Ago


The secrets of the world are secrets yet, in so many ways, there secrecy is hidden simply because we are so caught up in our own affairs that we do not take time to 'smell the roses' and thus discover those secrets which have been in front of us all the time. Secrets of nature and life need to be discovered, and this poem reminds us of that. A very good effort. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


So true and so perfectly put. I couldn't ask for more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i luv it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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