Imagine

Imagine

A Poem by lots fo love ♥

Secret worlds, hidden tresure, fariy tales, sparkling waterfalls that change color in the golden sun. They all come from a little thing way back in your brain. Imagine a world of stars where you go moon hopping. Anything you can set your mind to you can do. Just imagine it.

© 2008 lots fo love ♥


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Secret worlds, hidden tresure, fariy tales, sparkling waterfalls that change color in the golden sun. They all come from a little thing way back in your brain. Imagine a world of stars where you go moon hopping. Anything you can set your mind to you can do. Just imagine it.

My alternate version

Realms of splendour, hidden beneath the sands of what has been and what yet will be, tales told by fairies, elves and creatures unknown, waterfalls imbued with the delight of a dozen splendid rainbows emanating from a fire most divine. And dost thou asketh of origins? Is my crooked answer the crypticities of a mind set on fantastic or, nay, wicked delight? Imagine a world of stars, were each is purchased with a handful of coins, the fruit of your wonder. For the possibilities before you are truely endless, as the sands on the seashore. If ye dare, contemplate such tales of sheer delight.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I'm imagining peopel dying. Is that bad? ._.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is very nice...I like the upbeat tone of it and the message it puts across. As well as using pretty words, you have conveyed an uplifting message very well. Great job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


"Imagine a world of stars where you go moon hopping." What a lovely thought and fascinating image. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Your version

Secret worlds, hidden tresure, fariy tales, sparkling waterfalls that change color in the golden sun. They all come from a little thing way back in your brain. Imagine a world of stars where you go moon hopping. Anything you can set your mind to you can do. Just imagine it.

My alternate version

Realms of splendour, hidden beneath the sands of what has been and what yet will be, tales told by fairies, elves and creatures unknown, waterfalls imbued with the delight of a dozen splendid rainbows emanating from a fire most divine. And dost thou asketh of origins? Is my crooked answer the crypticities of a mind set on fantastic or, nay, wicked delight? Imagine a world of stars, were each is purchased with a handful of coins, the fruit of your wonder. For the possibilities before you are truely endless, as the sands on the seashore. If ye dare, contemplate such tales of sheer delight.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can imagine it. I can see it in my head now because you were very descriptive of what to picture. nice job and well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I love it Megan if you'll believe I'll Imagine

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 13, 2008

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lots fo love ♥
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